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22 May 2007 @ 05:48 pm
New story: Storm Winds  

Hey everyone!

I have finally finished a long story that I've been working on, and it's a bit of an epic.  So, because it's so long, I'll post it maybe one or two chapters a day.  I don't expect it to be read all at once!

I am really proud of it though.  I've never written anything so long!  I will be happy to hear any constructive criticisms or ideas you'd like to give during the course of the story.  Parts of it were actually started last year, so I hope that everything reads smoothly.  If you actually stick through to the very end (and I hope it is interesting and entertaining enough for you to do so), please let me know, and you will have my undying gratitude!

Enough with my rambling, and on with the introduction!

This is a stand alone story, completely separate from the other two series I have started, though I recommend that you read those first in order to familiarize yourself with the main character, Kaze.  This is the story chronicling how Kaze became a werewolf in the first place, and is a major turning point in her life as a demon-hunter.

New characters:
Zak - fellow demon-hunter and Kaze's best friend.  He's entirely human, but dabbles in magic on the side.  She's hung out with him now for three and half years, training in their shared profession.  

Summary:
Three years before meeting Ikiyouyou in Japan, Kaze and Zak have traveled extensively throughout Europe and Asia, even venturing to other parts of the world for adventure.  Now they have been called to investigate the strange happenings in an isolated town...and come face to face with a problem known as...werewolves.

Storm Winds

 

By

 

Kaze

 

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Prologue

 

            Silence.  Snow seems to have a special type of magic, laying down a soundproof blanket over everything it touches.  Nothing stirs; even the trees seem to be unusually still.  It is even possible, in spots sheltered from the wind, to actually hear the sound of the softly falling white.

 

            The snow cover tonight is relatively light, though.  It’s the first snow of the season, and lies wet and cold upon the ground.  But it has stopped falling, for the moment.  Only a gentle breeze and occasional creak from high up in the pines break the quiet of the night.

 

            Not even the soft footstep of a clawed, wet paw is heard above the deafening silence.  Its owner pauses, just inside the shadows at the edge of the tree line, at the top of a hill.  A cold, damp nose is raised into the wind.  It twitches slightly as it unlocks the night’s secrets.  Pointed ears flick back and forth, intent on capturing the smallest sound.  Finally, after a moment’s pause, the creature gracefully moves forward into the moonlight.

 

            The soft radiance shines off pure silver-white fur, creating a faint aura of light around the creature.  A wolf-like head is tilted slightly upwards, still questing for information, as deep, glittering emerald eyes scour the pale landscape below.  The wolf slowly raises up on two well-muscled back legs, long, thick neck fur blowing gently back in the wind.  It shifts into a weight-forward stance, balanced by a flowing tail, its two furred, human-like arms held in a relaxed position.  Muscles ripple, visible even under the thick fur.  The glint of silver reveals large, sharply curved talons at the end of each finger.

 

            This werewolf, or so a human would call it, is remarkable among its kind.  Standing head and shoulders above the rest of its brethren, its strength and power eclipses even the toughest and most long-lived of its kin.  Cunning intelligence sparking from deep within its eyes marks a beast that has traveled far and experienced much…perhaps more than a mere mortal could ever comprehend.  Even the name “werewolf” would seem to be reserved for a lesser being.  This wolf requires a different title…daiwolf[1], perhaps, as it is far greater in every aspect than any werewolf could hope to aspire to.

 

            The animal breathes in deeply the night air, before letting loose a great puff of white, swirling upon itself before dispersing into the darkness, tiny ice crystals sparkling in the night.  The moon is full, illuminating a few puffy clouds, low in the sky.  It had already snowed earlier that evening, but the wolf knew, from the crisp smell on the breeze, that another snowfall would come later that night.

 

            And now…it is time to move.  The wolf barely takes a step forward before it seems to flow down the hillside like quicksilver on a sharpened blade, the steady measured beats of its strong legs effortlessly propelling it forward.  The long, shimmering fur on its neck and tail billows in the wind of its passing.

 

            The daiwolf can travel like this for days on end, never tiring, its smooth, easy run carrying it far distances over the course of a single night.  Indeed, this is what the wolf lives for these days.  The endless run, the endless search, for the one place where he might finally find peace…a promised land, perhaps.  The run itself brings only a small shadow of tranquility to his otherwise boundless rage.

 

            For not only has he no peer in this world, but also none other that he would call kin.  Not any more.  So he continues to search, destined to do so until the end of time, his fury at the world growing over the long, solitary years of his existence. 

 

            It was not surprising then, that he happened to pick up…followers, occasionally, along his way.  Monsters, in appearance similar to himself.  Rejected, as he was, and left to wander in the wilderness until they perished, or were killed.  He supposed he might have felt some kinship with them, but they were lesser beings, and he honestly didn’t really care.  They never lasted long, at any rate, either unable to keep up with his relentless pace, or getting themselves slaughtered by humans.

 

            But they would gather near to him, drawn to him, by some power he did not fully understand, whenever he lingered in one area too long.  Perhaps they sought safety, perhaps friendship, of a sort.  He tolerated their presence, as long as they kept their distance and did not get in his way.  And then he would begin the hunt, and they would follow.  Stopping for no one and nothing, he would sweep through the landscape, destroying anything that impeded his progress. 

 

            He would cut entire swaths through towns, which would incite his wrath simply by existing.  And the werewolves that followed him preyed on the remains, until one side or the other were destroyed.  It was fortunate that the daiwolf, by his very nature, favored the uninhabited wilderness.  And thus, was rarely seen, and even more rarely mentioned…except as a ghost who traveled the mountains.

 

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to be continued...


[1] Daiwolf – Japanese dai, meaning great; a Great Wolf; also a play on the word direwolf – as a direwolf is a more terrible form of wolf, so too is a daiwolf a more terrible form of werewolf


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Please let me know if you have any questions!  I'll be more than happy to answer.  This first part is written a little oddly (I guess it was a strange bit of inspiration that struck me), but don't worry because everything after that is normal.

 
 
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( 12 comments — Post a new comment )
spectre_eric[info]spectre_eric on May 23rd, 2007 11:35 pm (UTC)
Nice stuff!

I had meant to reply earlier. I like your wolf style. They are my second favorite natural animal (After the cat-tiger-white).

The FF wolves in your gallery are a cute homage. I'm a big FF7 fan -- have you tried Okami for PS2?

I had almost expected you to be working on a webcomic of your story with your great art...

my scribblings http://gallery.r3d.net http://airfire.r3d.net
Kazaam[info]cskazaam on May 24th, 2007 03:04 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! So you made it to my deviantArt gallery, huh? I was also planning on posting those here, one at a time, in case people missed that. I'm really glad that you like them!

No, I haven't personally tried Okami, but I've seen it played, and I'll probably get it sometime soon.

Thanks for the idea about the webcomic! I don't know if I'll do anything like that anytime soon, but I have toyed with doing short little one-shots. We'll see. I've got other projects I've got to finish first...but if anything happens you can be sure I'll post it here.

I see you've got your own comic! Interesting stuff. Thanks a lot for sharing!
spectre_eric[info]spectre_eric on May 24th, 2007 03:15 am (UTC)
Yes. How do you do your art? sketch-ink-scan? pad?

I'm always trying to learn more -- and am torn between "portrait" art and "webcomic" quality (speed) art...

thanks!
Kazaam[info]cskazaam on May 24th, 2007 03:58 am (UTC)
I do all of my art with pencil and paper, and then I scan it in. In fact, there is nothing in my art that has not been done entirely by hand. All the shading and any fix-up from the rough sketch is by hand.

The only exception to that is this: I have a friend with photoshop who resizes my art so it is not so huge (I scan at 400 resolution), and she may simply darken certain areas to make them show up better, or erase "scanner marks" that occur on the edges. She also usually tints the color so my webpage has a bit of variety. But that's pretty much it.

The key to scanning your work, though, is having a really good scanner, preferably with lineart settings. I was lucky enough to find one that I borrow whenever I'm ready to scan. And it is just about perfect! If you've tried scanning then you know the problem of stuff coming out either pitch black or barely visible. This scanner has none of those problems! I'll have to break down and buy one sometime!

For improving your art, I'd say focus on "portrait" type stuff first until you've got the look you want and you're comfortable with drawing the character. One thing I try to do is to focus on one or two things to improve with each picture. That usually works for me.

If you have any other questions at all about specifics or you need any more suggestions, let me know! I'm no professional, but I'm happy to share what I've learned.
spectre_eric[info]spectre_eric on May 24th, 2007 11:51 pm (UTC)
I also pencil-ink-scan. My driver has a "B&W photo" setting that seems to do it justice. I just have to remember to have the picture (or a page with writing) on the scanner when it previews. If it is empty or has a blank piece of paper, it is, as you say, black or white across the board...
I override the default resolution of 150dpi and scan at 300. That seems to give me space to play with effects, then downsize it to 1200 pixels wide (and 800 wide for the "weekly" view).


Hmm, how long have you been drawing at this level? Do you visualize your goal much?

(Hmm, these threads are getting long. Should we move to an email? I own r3d.net . You can reach me with ericfunk@ there.)


I am sure to allocate 1 hour each evening to my drawing, and this has meant my comic since about november. I'll try to think up some "portrait" to draw.

My real hobby passion is writing -- I write RPG supplements for SJ Games.
Kazaam[info]cskazaam on May 25th, 2007 02:44 am (UTC)
I don't mind discussing stuff here, unless you'd rather move. Gives me something to look forward to! And I check it more often than e-mail.

Well, I've been drawing for as long as I can remember, though my only art classes were ones I took in grade school and the few mandatory ones in high school. At this level though...that's kinda hard to say. My drawings focus on only a few subjects, and I've been drawing those pretty well for a long time (dragons mostly). As for the wolves you've seen...well that took off within the last year or two, about the time I got into doing FF7 fanart and got a deviantArt account.

If by "visualizing your goal" you mean I actually see the finished picture in my mind, then yes, I do it all the time. Usually if I don't have a semi-clear idea of what I want to do, then I wait until I get one. But then again, it's usually the image in my head that inspires me to draw in the first place. I get a lot of ideas from other pictures I see or music I like.

RPG supplements, huh? As in stories? Sorry, though I do role-playing, I am a relative newbie at it, and the DM takes care of all the hard work. Do you mean that your work is actually published in the manuals?
spectre_eric[info]spectre_eric on May 25th, 2007 10:59 pm (UTC)

Well, I normally only read and post on Sunday (as time permits). I have LJ set to email me when someone replies to my comments or posts.

I've been sketching on and off for years -- but I started the web page on my server for it. My mom is a professinal artist, so my "furries" are just "cartoons" to her -- somewhat below her. The tiger that I use as my LJ icon was a challenge...

I also drew dragons mostly until Ilona started telling me about the Drinan world. Then I started drawing furries more.


RPGs... I've played D&D, and a few others, but prefer GURPS. http://www.sjgames.com/gurps . It handles most types of setting better than D&D, I find. D&D is good for cinematic characters that can take insane amounts of damage.


With regard to writing, each article has some story elements, but they revolve around technology, a planet, science, or such. Here are some examples that the magazine :

http://gurps.r3d.net/Articles/articles.html?searchstr=100%#top


I have had some published in some books ... such as Biotech...

http://www.sjgames.com/gurps/books/bio-tech/

If you click the "Table of Contents" you can see my name under "additional material by"
spectre_eric[info]spectre_eric on May 24th, 2007 03:17 am (UTC)
oops, I meant to add that the orgami-seal mechanic is very clever. It also hides the type of ward until deployed -- in case a spirit watches what kind of seal is being readied...
Kazaam[info]cskazaam on May 24th, 2007 04:07 am (UTC)
Thanks! When I developed that attack, it was improvised from the regular flat paper seals that are used in Japan. Originally it was done as a joke (this is a character I play in an RPG), but it became one of Kaze's signature moves. There was actually no reason or use to having the paper folded, until I wrote that story. Then I figured I'd create a logical purpose for it and at the same time get around the problem of the spells having to be redone over time (since they'd fade otherwise). I thought it was pretty clever myself. Now the DM can't tell me to use up more paper to redo them. lol

That's also a neat idea that you added on...I will definitely have to remember that. Thanks!
spectre_eric[info]spectre_eric on May 24th, 2007 11:39 pm (UTC)
Hmm, RPG...

from the comments and 20 reference, I'd say D&D. Do you play furries from the Savage Species book?

What kind of mage? :)


I can also envision an orgami mage asking someone to get one "it's the frog with the raw paper"

Shape and paper type combinations are necessary to identify them by feel alone... I would not turn my attention from demons!



Story comments:
the "wild" prolog seems nicely narrated. It certainly sets the scene of this primal creature.

I like your sense of pacing... I am reminded of Ruin Explorers and Slayers (in the damage clauses)
Say, are you an anime fan? I sense a Chrono Cross reference.

(Wolf's rain? :) )
Kazaam[info]cskazaam on May 25th, 2007 03:10 am (UTC)
Well, you got it right that everything is loosely based on D&D...but my DM has created his own system that involves (from the way it's explained to me) a lot more variables for the character, but ultimately makes actions more realistic. Much of the monster material and spells are taken or adapted from D&D, however.

And the story we play is actually, not furries, but has to do with vampires. My character is actually Kaze, the same werewolf you've been reading about. She's not a mage, but a demon-hunter by profession, and the spells I was talking about come from a D&D Demon Hunter manual (at least I believe it is D&D). So several different aspects have been combined to make my character. In fact, the stories I write exist within the same world I play in: present day Earth.

Wow, I love your ideas about the shape and paper type! The shapes I know already, but I didn't even think about the type of paper, though that makes a lot of sense. I will definitely be remembering that.

Glad you like the pacing! I hope it stays pretty good throughout the story, since parts were written at different times.

I am an anime fan...but only of certain anime. I have not seen Chrono Cross, though, or Wolf's Rain, but I would like to. So this hasn't been directly inspired by anything really, except my own imagination. I am curious, though: what parallels do you see?
spectre_eric[info]spectre_eric on May 25th, 2007 11:09 pm (UTC)
Ah, a secret war type setting. Those are fun to work with.

Ah, well, I have not run much of a hunter campaign recently, but I do have a vampire hunter/watcher setting that I'm starting with. I call the organization ICON (Investigation, Containment and Observation of Netherworlders). Ilona has been reading Anne Rice recently, so the has added some hints of the Talamaska.


Well, I did take an origami class. There are foil papers, rough, "hand-made" paper, regular, smooth, glossy, speckled... and a person could pre-fold the paper to have different lines or such...

Well, Chrono Crusade (oops) is a demon hunter setting set in the 1920s. It revolves about a demon hunter and her demon sidekick. Both appear to be abotu 14 and 13 years old (he looks human -- usually). She is a member of "the Magdeline Order" which provides "enchanted" holy weapons, all with names like Gospel, Holy, Trinity... She also seems to blow up a building in each episode...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chrono_Crusade


Wolf's Rain is about wolves with the ability to make humans see them as humans... in a world where the environment is mostly ruined.

They deal with the primal desires of the wolves against the structure of the humans.


re: email vs. LJ... this LJ window text entry window is really small.
 
 

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